Lucy
is a correspondent. (nowadays 在這不很合適，現今, 現代。We all use computers nowadays.
We all have mobile phones nowadays) She won Publisher Prize in 2016. Her
articles (或者writings) are always determined
and sensible, which can identify her characters. (identify可以直接加名詞, 其實這句話想表達的是 兩個意思(兩句話), 一句話只能表達一個意思 )
所以這句話可以改成兩句話 或 一個重句(重句的用處就在這-儅想用一句話表達兩個意思的時候)
(1)
Her
articles (或者writings) are always determined
and sensible.
They (指articles 或 writings) can identify her characters.
(2)
Her
articles (或者writings) are always determined
and sensible, (逗號 或 省略) which (相當於上句裏的they (指articles 或 writings)) can identify her characters。
Sharon可以看到爲什麽和如何用重句。這是一個很重要的語法點。
Lucy
works hard on everything. 或
Lucy does everything hard.
Sharon要按照這個詞自己特定的格式, 不要使用自己的格式 或者 中文的格式。比如 這句話
要想說 work hard
只能用
work hard
study hard
其他任何形式都是不正確的，只按照語法的格式表達。
She studied hard in college. 完全正確。這一句話結束了。句號
three years after (加she)
graduated, she found a job in local ABC TV station。perfect完全正確。這一句話結束了。句號
“一句話只表達一個意思”
during
this (換成the) two years she made a lots
of reports, news。完全正確。這一句話結束了。句號
this 後面接單數 所以不能接 two years, three books …
要用 the, these, those.
用the最簡單, 後面接 單數和複數都可以
The
book, the apples
This
book
that book
the book
These
books
those books
the books
the (用her 比較好 )employer and colleagues said “Lucy is the hardest person
in the company”。
最好用 the most hard-working person …
就把Hard-working 當作一個詞, 形容詞。不拆開用
這一句話結束了。句號
Lucy
has （不用has用was）sent to New York （加and） became (過去時 正確) a great journalist, 這一句話結束了。句號
是被send 到 new york的 用be sent, 而且是過去的事 所以用 was sent
she
grabbed （過去時）any opportunity to improve
herself,
especially
she went to Le-Banon where （應該用which, 解釋起來比較複雜 sharon記住就好了 ) is one of （加 the most）dangerous countries (複數) in war in early 2016
有兩种方法說這句話
one of the most ……. countries (複數)
或
the most …… country (單數)
nobody neither wants to go nor take risks.
Sharon對neither … nor … 的用法還不扎實
語法點可以先到語法書看如何用是標準和正確的格式然後用最標準的方式使用
這句話可以說
Nobody
wants to go there and take risks. 雖然簡單 但是是一點錯都沒有的
如果一定要用neither nor 可以是
People
neither want to go there nor take risks.
1．一個句子只表達一個意思。講完了就用句號。不要一整段全用逗號。（與中文用法不同）
2．先從一個一個短句做起，哪怕用最簡單但最正確的語法表達出來
Lucy
has two characteristics that have helped her make her successful (用success 因爲 success 是名詞
successful 是形容詞). perfect
First （用firstly ）she is determined, organization (用organized) and direct (用 directed) to do everything 句號
Example（只能用 for example）
she
research （要用過去時 researched ）information from （from 改用of）multi culture before she went
to Le-Banon.（句號） she said “nobody can stop me when I prepare already”.
Second （用secondly）she is sensible, (句號)
she
usually lest （lists. usually 通常的狀況用一般現在時） the advantages (加s複數) and disadvantage (加s複數) on a paper （paper 不可數。on paper 或 on a piece of paper）before make a decided or adventure。
before
she makes (一般現在時) a decision or an adventure.
because of two
of the important characteristics, Lucy is able to make report are excellent and deeply.
Because
of her two important characters, Lucy is able to
make reports excellent and deep
簡單直接說
Make +
something + 形容詞
Make +
someone/something + to do + something (就像 ask
Ask +
someone/something + to do + something)